It’s a truth often forgot by readers: Characters and Authors can and do lie. That Ancient prophecy might not only be false, even worse it could be a trap sent to manipulate future populations to do certain actions. Just because the head villain says he’s your father doesn’t mean he’s not just saying that so he can cut off your other hand. The Old wise Man leading the hero down the path to his true destiny might actually be stealing everything the hero owns why he is away from his house.
Readers have this tendency to see the Author themselves and certain devices (wise old women and hermits, prophecies and last will and testaments, deathbed revelations, etc) as immutable truth. Part of this is from the oldest myths encouraging this, sometimes it’s latter day laziness on modern authors, or maybe it’s just the feel that an author is revealing a world and story to you, so you can’t imagine why they would not tell the truth.
This of course means that some of the greatest emotional shocks can be from when one of these trusted sources lies to you. If done too much the readers won’t trust anything and they can be numbed by further twists. It can be as bad as M. Night Shamalyan (don’t make me spell this right) movies got, or poorly written soap operas. If used sparingly though you can hook them into the narrative and then turn the tables on them when unexpected. It is definitely something I utilize in my writing (including the section I am currently working on in my novel). The current novel I am reading also utilizes it. As a person who loves twists I had guessed the big one but the way it was revealed showed further twists ripple out of the main one I was not expecting, and caused the same sort of reaction I like to give to my readers!
Personally I think the best way to serve a lie to the readers is with the sandwich method. Have two things they expect to be true or from true sources turn out that way, and then then in the middle of that have a lie. It makes it much harder to expect, and means thata later truth they will think is a lie won’t be. In other words, this allows you to shock them with the truth!
The poll is being narrowed down from the last post, and I may keep it open for a few more days. I will then narrow down the Epic Novel book title with one more poll where each voter cna only vote once. Either way I should know the title by the end of next week, and then I will be searching for a new cover artist. This next epic novel (not the new novel in the trilogy being written) has a different feel, so I wanted to brand it with a different artist.
Today’s poll is about naming, though. The second novel in the Allmother’s Fire trilogy is what I am currently writing, and I have narrowed it down to two names. If you have read a decent amount of the book the reasons for these possibilities will be obvious, with the more you have read giving more nuance to both possibilities. I have run both of these names through my mind for a while, and I at least wanted to see what others are thinking.
The next novel in the Allmother’s Fire Trilogy should be:
1)The Rise of the Allmother’s Grace
2)Rise from the Sun Below
Both also “fit” along with the current title of “The Fall of House Nemeni.”
World Info for Allmother’s Fire
One of the types of Noble Houses not currently shown are the one’s whose Domain is over Motion. There are multiple Houses that have these abilities, but each manifest in different ways. Some are direct, and can move themselves or vehicles or weapons faster or slower depending on their specialty. Some are more indirect, and can use control over motion to increase or decrease the temperature. These users do not know why it works this way, but the results are obviously true.
The other Houses not detailed yet are a lot of the minor guilds. Some of these like the Dyemaker’s guild have as much temporal power as the lower noble houses, but the span of their abilities are so narrow (being able to change the color of objects in the case of the mentioned guild) they do not command as much respect. It seems like there are an infinite amount of families that can do some minor thing to loophole the Grand Laws of the Universe. It is thought by some that even the lowest peasant might find that his family had some unknown ability if only they had the leisure to practice and figure out just what they were.